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An Ode To Mister A

You are my sun, my moon and glowing stars,
A thousand joyful smiles possess my mind.
My love for you could take us both to MARS!
... But you’re a total spaz and not too kind.

You’re not as handsome as Orlando Bloom.
Your hair makes you look like a Buddhist priest.
And saying this will bring about my doom
Pretend To Be Nice at the very least!

Kaz says you’re not as fit as Gerard Way
Not fit, but you still turned our Johnny gay
So long and goodnight, my dear Mister A
But Jeebus Christ, they’ve planned our wedding day!
So bring about our doom and come what may
But don’t worry; we are o-fucking-kay.

Yours,
The iPod Fairy, Theory Gnome and Screw-Up Pixie.
©2007-2009 ~HannahPhantom6
:iconhannahphantom6:

Author's Comments

Collab between me, Angie and Kazzy, written from Angie's POV.
So, yeah. This is what happens when teenagers get high on sonnets xP
It's not that we hate Airgun, no way! Just that we got a little carried away.
... woah, ryhming xDDD
The ending is weird, it should only be two lines of rhyming - a couplet - but we had too many good rhymes.

PLEASE DON'T KILL ME, ANY OF YOU >____<

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:iconhyperactivepanda:
xDDDDDDD~
ilu all. <3

Did you noticed that the two of you actually did virtually all the insulting?

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-~ Angie <3
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"I reject your reality, and substitute my own!"
- Adam Savage
:iconhannahphantom6:
Not exactly. I was in your mindset the whoooole time.
xDDDD

--
Would you pray for me?
-- You don't know a thing about my sins; how the misery begins --
Or make a saint of me?
-- You don't know, so I'm burning, I'm burning... --
~ x o x o
:heart:
:iconsas13:
oh, gawd everyone,i so remember that planning.......so much fun.
AWESOME!

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~KarenWanny made my avatar, she is awesome!

I rarely log out, so dont think I am ignoring you!
:iconhyperactivepanda:
OwO~
You WHAT? T.T;

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-~ Angie <3
-----------------
"I reject your reality, and substitute my own!"
- Adam Savage
:iconairgun:
Well, lets get the formalities out of the way first
FUCK YOU ALL!!!! *hehe*
But, reading it, Ive deicided its good. So many kudos go to Abgie, Hannah, Kaz and Sas.
*Air-Chan* <-ZOMG youve converted me.
:iconkarenwanny:
LOL! God, we had so much fun doing this.
We make a good team writing sonnets, WRITE MORE WRITE MORE!
You can kinda tell when me and Abgie jumped in xD
Mwuha, and I managed to squeeze in some MCR refrences <3
You all love em really

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~Screw-up Pixie <3
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FREE HUGS FTW!!! =] ~<3
:iconhannahphantom6:
Well, this is an interesting bunch of comments.
@Abgie: Hey, it is supposedly from your POV. xP
@Sas: You have to help next time, though I'm sure you'd pervify sonnets somehow >__________> :heart:
@Airchan: Yay, we have sortofapproval! My fave kind. [/abgiegetsme]
@Kaz: xDDD We are so gonna have to do more. Dropping MCR references as we go!

--
Would you pray for me?
-- You don't know a thing about my sins; how the misery begins --
Or make a saint of me?
-- You don't know, so I'm burning, I'm burning... --
~ x o x o
:heart:
:iconsuna-rose351:
Lol
Nice...
:XD:
Ummm... What's a sonnet??
^^;

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<3 Would you like to leave this human race tonight? <3
:iconhannahphantom6:
thankyou :heart:
A sonnet is a kind of poem. Shakespeare wrote loads, he's really famous for them xD it was a while since I studied them in english, which is kinda where this one came from... sonnets are basically 14 lines long, with the basic structure of three stanzas and then a rhyming couplet at the end, so like this: a-b-a-b, c-d-c-d, e-f-e-f, g-g.


--
Would you pray for me?
-- You don't know a thing about my sins; how the misery begins --
Or make a saint of me?
-- You don't know, so I'm burning, I'm burning... --
~ x o x o
:heart:

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